david dunn
Comments
10
VMP (USA)
Apr 27, 2008
Song: cant let go
An apparent wisdom and vulnerability, great virtues. Powerful tune. Keep this up!
VMP (USA)
Apr 27, 2008
You've got your own style, can tell it's you and that's cool. You can definitely sing and play and the lyrics, melodies, and flow on this are really great. To sound like this at your age is amazing, almost scary to think what you'll be capable of later on.
VMP (USA)
Apr 27, 2008
Song: regardless
Well written, a nice job with the lyrics, meaningful, touching. Very good vocals, guitar, and production. (Guitar sounds sweet!) Certainly strong enough to be extended a little more. Enjoyed it!
Daniel Waite
Apr 23, 2008
Song: free
Nice melody and message...heartfelt. Nice vocal effects on this one. Again, very short...would like to hear the bottom end of the chords, maybe some ascending or descending riffs...overall great work on all three songs...nice production and clarity. Keep creating my friend...:D
Daniel Waite
Apr 23, 2008
Song: goodnite
This has a nice feel and flow to it. Meaningful lyrics and genuine emotion...plus a Spongebob picture...what's not to like! Good job!
:D
Daniel Waite
Apr 23, 2008
Song: superstars
Hi David,
You have a very contemporary vocal style and sound. Nice chording and melody. A bit short, just when I thought it was going to break open, it stopped...would like to hear a nice chorus and possibly some acoustic lead on this one. Overall, nice work!
VMP (USA)
Apr 19, 2008
Song: superstars
Well written and performed with a maturity and flow that belies your age and experience. A good tune by any standard.
good job