couchgrouch

I cant believe these comments how anyone could put memorable music to a series of vague thoughts , would be an impossible task for the best of composers no corresponding verse line has the same length of meter and most multi syllable words do not have the correct natural stress . All matching lines need the same syllable count and most of your ones dont maybe the reason you dont mark your Verses from you Climbs or Bridges ; I wont expect an answer because you obviously dont know why You need a severe dose of Sheila Davis

Ever tried writing lyrics to finished music ???? Even re writing one of your favourite songs with a new lyric You could be pleasantly pleased with the result your lyrics deserve better music

How about an update on your career? :) Surely you are getting some cuts on these songs? If not, it's only a matter of time. Great work, Robert.

thanks folks and I'm sorry to say I never saw the last few comments till now so my apologies for not replying sooner.

Great song! I love the melody so much! It is so catchy! Very good lyrics too! 5 stars because they won't take 6!