so, billy, this is a great start. i'd like to suggest a couple of things: on punchline, there was a great lead-in for the first 10 seconds or so of the song, but then the intro went on for about 45 seconds before things got rolling. keep the intros shorter. in hello to goodbye, i loved the parts in the song where the band stopped and there was a nice contrast with the full, rocking sound. i'd start the song off in the quiet mode and then hit it will the full sound at the 1st chorus, and continuing the contrasts as you have in the rest of the song. also, liked the ending on this one a lot.
--stockwrock
so, billy, this is a great start. i'd like to suggest a couple of things: on punchline, there was a great lead-in for the first 10 seconds or so of the song, but then the intro went on for about 45 seconds before things got rolling. keep the intros shorter. in hello to goodbye, i loved the parts in the song where the band stopped and there was a nice contrast with the full, rocking sound. i'd start the song off in the quiet mode and then hit it will the full sound at the 1st chorus, and continuing the contrasts as you have in the rest of the song. also, liked the ending on this one a lot. --stockwrock