You just need to work out the vocal quality first fam. Aside from that your lyrics are sharp and I think you have a dope voice, but your delivery is a key. At times it's on point, but I can tell by some of the words you use within your ending rhyme schemes there your having trouble riding with the beat. Take your time and practice things out. I'd rather hear one good song then a bunch of bad songs you feel me? quality over quanity.
Keep it up doe madness
Thurston
