Rob4adollakabase

Hi, I`m a Rapper & make a mixtape. I like your Style, your Beatz are very TIGHT! Please contact me at (mcadriano@okay.ms) I pay also for Beatz, Peace!

............Ayo homey im listenin and I think the tracks about the dope game & strip clubs aint really bumpin in my head yet so I cant say... The beat 2 Drought Season sucks to me and the hook aint that good.....Ayo if u know WAR, go 2 him in Tampa (I think) but u know mane i just dont know........... Ayo I got an idea mane cuz I havent hurrd many rappers in Sarasota do this but make a track about something that "DOESNT revolve around the stereotypes of rap music" No Sex, Strip Clubs, female body parts, lust, money, buyin expensive stuff, killin, fightin, baby mommaz, competition (beefin or battles), etc. Try that then post em up on soundclick 4 me 2 hear and ill get back at ya ASAP aite..... And in the meantime, check out the beats on my page and vote 4 em or even purchase em if u like em like that......... http:/

yo man u need 2 put some work on yo rhymes mane u aint bad but u aint good either. I hear "Drop it on 20s" after the hook. Yo rhymes sound too simplified also mane. And i think its the mic or something but the your songs sound kinda "empty" if u know what I mean. Listen 2 some lyricists like Fabolous Llyod Banks and others like that and listen 2 em. I aint sayin be a "cookie cutter copy" of another dude but you'll notcie a majority of acts getting signed have some sort of lyricism in their rhymes. For example, Young Jeezy, and Dem Franchise Boyz.