Sounds like you have a lot of imagination. This song is rather strange & emotional to a limited degree. Please be not offended. I will be honest not here to stroke anybody's ego. My goal is to give you my impressions & the knowledge I learned assist you to the best of my ability. It would be a sin to stroke your ego & which provides no help. Labels, producers & others view this site. I want to succeed to as much as anyone on soundclick.com but by helping you maybe you'll help me. I don't brag nor ashamed of my abilities. Now off to critique.
I like this tune. It might need vocals either in the form of singing and/or vocal loops/sound bites. Vocals are not always good for music but maybe in the case of the song it needs some vocals.
You stated you aren't finished with the song. It sounds like you are on the right path. Go to a local library or a place where kids trust you & let them listen to your work in progress. You be surprised at the thoughts & opinions of children. Most o
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Sounds like you have a lot of imagination. This song is rather strange & emotional to a limited degree. Please be not offended. I will be honest not here to stroke anybody's ego. My goal is to give you my impressions & the knowledge I learned assist you to the best of my ability. It would be a sin to stroke your ego & which provides no help. Labels, producers & others view this site. I want to succeed to as much as anyone on soundclick.com but by helping you maybe you'll help me. I don't brag nor ashamed of my abilities. Now off to critique. I like this tune. It might need vocals either in the form of singing and/or vocal loops/sound bites. Vocals are not always good for music but maybe in the case of the song it needs some vocals. You stated you aren't finished with the song. It sounds like you are on the right path. Go to a local library or a place where kids trust you & let them listen to your work in progress. You be surprised at the thoughts & opinions of children. Most o