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sumR's SoundClick blog - Letter to Lan (part I of VI)

aka Candy2046



(***painless all in one version available here---> A Winter's Tail)



A Winter's~ Tail



Hi Lan,

One harsh Winter about five years ago, perhaps the worst in Southern California's history, it rained and rained and rained, day after day without stop, it fell so hard and fast that rivers dried up by ten years of drought quickly filled and overflowed almost over night. This torrent of water led to sudden mudslides...homes worth millions of dollars slid off mountain sides, highways collapsed, and some people, caught by surprise, were actually buried alive...

Late one night in the middle of this most horrific storm
a little field mouse came into my home
his fur was frazzled looking quite affright
sticking out in all directions,
a puffy gray and white

I couldn't help but coo in friendly sympathy
for the sight of him during our most unfortunate situation
appealed to me, as he kept bouncing into my room
hopping erratically the way field mice are known to

Reaching the center
he would often completely freeze
with head tilted just so,
to affix a curious beady black eye on me

Amused, I watched this dark
diminutive oval for an eye
grow very wide considering
my enormous size

It was easy to read
what was going through his mind
and sympathize when
he decided it wisest to flee

Over and over he did this dance for me
kept me laughing constantly
bouncing in, deliberating, running away again...

What a cute little fellow
both a strange and curious sight
the perfect remedy
for a cold and rainy night

It's ok, or so I thought,
He can stay through the storm,
for where do animals go
during torrential downpours?

©2009 www.aplace4sum.com

posted by sumR on Sun Feb 8, 2009 @ 07:04 PM     7 comments    post a comment
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:: posted by GTHeadbanger on Mon Feb 9, 2009 @ 02:05 AM   
I loved it!!!!
if you're on myspace add me/jmokha
~M
:: posted by mzmokha on Tue Feb 10, 2009 @ 12:46 AM   
Aww how cute!
I'm going to read more...
:: posted by emmaoproductions on Sat Feb 14, 2009 @ 09:34 AM   
Very cute!
:: posted by steph31 on Fri Feb 20, 2009 @ 11:01 PM   
I really do like this story. Your words bring to life the moving picture in my head. You are a talented writer!!! big grin :D
:: posted by BETWIXTER X on Mon Apr 6, 2009 @ 10:00 AM   
Yes baby summer I am that mouse who taunted and teased you all through the night.
I let you know I loved you by keeping my dark eye in sight, and pranced around
you for my delight..Prancing and dancing my way to your heart, by morning, I headed out,
because I was hungry and needed to find me some nuts!.....Lisa...xoxo
:: posted by Rockaway33 on Sat May 2, 2009 @ 07:39 PM   
very nice playing !!

thanks i like it very much too..

bye Bye..
:: posted by yankeenl on Sat Oct 3, 2009 @ 07:52 AM   
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