Lyrics: First song ive heard from you and i will say im slightly impressed
Creativety: You are within topic but not as creative as i thought you coulda been
Delivery: Your delivery was actually good...just quality is pretty bad...the quality of skit sounds better
Overall Thought: I actually liked this song...I wont dock you on quality because its good enough for me to hear. I liked the hook..the little singy tone was good. Verses were decent...Nothing out of the ordinary but nothing bad. I dug the tone of the song tho and liked how you rode the beat.
Fav Line : Its not me..Its just me with a slight twist...devil horns and a ice pick
EDIT.....Digi, your track is really good. I just played it for the 2nd time. It sounds like something for a movie, I can actually see what you say in the verses happening. I think the only thing playing against you is that "multiple" theme. Other than that, your track has a real good feel to it and you did your thing on it. Good sh** .
i agree that the deliver might have been a little off but there was something about it that really added to the style and uniqueness
i definitely wouldnt wanna hear it on every track but it really worked for this one
definitely a good way to use that beat, im really into like bizarre lyrics over hype ass club type beats like that
i wasnt really feelin the dude on the second verse but the track definitely did feel like it should have more than 1 person on it
Definately not something i would listen too. Not my kind of beat really.
I like how you went about mixing this track. Now the mixing overall
could be better. However you werent afraid to experiment
with layering, pitch shifts, and many other effects which ultimately
gave your hook this strange Leanard Cohen feel to it, which i really liked.
The verses could have been better, i felt you were reading them.
Your energy and delivery on the verses made me not take you serious.
maybe thats what you were going for. but look at it like this, for those listeners that really
enjoy music like this, if you took it serious, the listener would take it more serious.
in short... didnt like the beat (just my taste), really liked the creativity, lyrics were good,
Delivery and Flow could be improved overall.