I fucks wit the track

Beat: wasnt my style but im not bias so it was def hot for what it was. I dont really have any problems with it.

Hook: was decent I think it could of had a lil more flavor to it but im not at all disappointed in it what so ever good shit.

Flow: everyone seemed to have a decent flow and nice rhyme scheme which is always a plus cuz it gives the track much more life and creativeness.

Qaulity: was on point everyones vocs sat on the track nicely and they were clear and seemed to be right where they needed to be.

Overall 8.5/10 good drop here

A - Structure - Win - Although for a true win, you'll need a radio mix. To explicit for mainstream. I'm sure you would be up for that right? Keeping it OFFICIAL.
B - Musicality - 8 - For the style of music I think you have plenty of suspense melodies going on. Good use of reverse sound FX as well.
C - Likability - 5 - To bring this up to a 9+ Check out my G spot.
D - Emotion - 5 - Well done I got the emotion very well.
E - Mix - 8 - Very nice job on the mix. Good bottom, The vocals are easily heard and tight sounding.
F - Master - N/A
G - OK, though the following might be somewhat controversial... I don't care. I think it's a valid point, and is Keeping it Official. Clean up the mild cussing. This is a message song that's pushing morals. You need to do away with the hypocrisy that's inferred by your immoral slang. Try to raise the seriousness of the "Product" message, break the cycle man! I think it would set you apart from the rest of the others out there trying to deliver the same message... I'd be so bold as to say I think it would set you ABOVE the rest as well.

In short - A bold track with a bit of mixed messages... perhaps for now Wink

-Dave (Largo)
www.soundclick.com/largo
www.myspace.com/largodigigeneration

THE PRODUCT :

Serious shit that comes across legit and hard. Not preaching, not judging. Trying to save the young heads from becoming black klan members.
Niggas killing niggas.

DC
http://www.myspace.com/swrecordsnet

C BALLIN:

The introduction is tight and compelling.The production and the arrangement is as world class as anything by Young Buck, Game and 50.
Straight up nigga shit.
This is money in the bank.

DC