Bob. You got what I call dead fish syndrome. Good music, is like a fish one may catch. Alive and with movement. Your song is like a fish caught an hour ago and thrown on the deck of a fishing boat. Dead fish syndrome. There's no grove in your music. Your music is not composed. You make sounds until repetition has put a tattoo in your brain, Then, you repeat that. Then, you actually produce it. Musicians are like magicians. You need a bag of tricks. You have not a single one. Good tone, bad music

"This is the kind of stuff I aspire to write. Very talented guitarist, knows how to arrange an idea. The sound and texture of the vocal compliment the music perfectly. Very nice job !"