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JBS - STRAIGHT OUT OF DAYTON

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Very Good!
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I like the drum pattern you created. I'm a producer too. Check out this one I made.

My input
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I'm digging how you layed your drums, some of the the melody seems off a bit though. All of your distorted strings(or pads) are a little too overbearing, bring down their levels. Your outro(sp?) is a bit too long. Overall i'd say you worked that beat. It gives me much joy to say that you've seemed to conqure the whole crunkish/electro sound.

what up fly
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nice track but I'm really feelin' that cow bell track, it has one of the throwedest grooves I've heard in a minute. holla at ya boy!

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ok everybody let's provide fly with the feedback he deserves .post your thoughts or addresses or label # or dj of the month... or whatever that could help him improve his musical experirnce....