tik777 posted on Sat May 3, 2003
Just Listen:
TIKJUDGEMENT version 2.0-
1. Beat-1 out of 1
2. Melody-1 out of 1
3. Hook-1.75 out of 2
4. Structure-1 out of 1
5. Writing-1 out of 1
6. Delivery-1.75 out of 2
7. Mixdown-1.75 out of 2

Prop level=9.25 out of 10
Unbelievable dawg you soooo close!
Peace
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TIK 777
http://www.soundclick.com/tik777

I like the sampling and the track very much, I feel like the lyrics could use some work. Not sure how I would improve on it, just giving you my gut opinion. Being a professional DJ, I play alot of hip-hop and rap at my gigs and the tracks you produce are good but really lack that chest pounding bass that people can groove to. My head was bobbin, but I wasn't leanin into it, ya know? Overall good track.

A+ Very well done. I like the beat and the lyrical meter. Sweet. I thought the AM radio sound was a nice touch too. ;) RATED: 10

Wow ... awesome! You certainly are talented!   RATED: 10

Damn u r soooo kreative. RATED: 10

damn dude.. you was kicking some ass on this one.. i had to d/l it.. first song i did that for on here.. well deserved 10..   RATED: 10

I guess they are haters Shawn... In any case I found this pretty decent.

Good syntax, word variety needs improvement. I have no comment regarding your over usage of the word "Fuck." We all have clutch words or phrases we use to put ryhmes together. Overall, the talent is there. Evolution & refinement of that talent will create a sharper ryhmer