BTW!! "Benevolence" is Beautiful!!!! SMIDI

imma so proud of u that u got ur album released! congrat!! imma download ur songs now and start pimpin it with that. haha

Markus

I'm lovin the curious song. Eninem Mockingbird...the beats in the begining are soft...maybe they should be more hard. I'm also loving Cassidy B Boy Stan..."chill'in the club"!!! YEAH BABY!!! Fabolous Now Ride...I love the beginging beats...they are so awesome. *nods head, hands in the air*!!!

I hope the feedback helps you babe.

love always, amber

I just listened to your samples and I'm gonna have to agree with everyone on how talented you are :)

Your sound is original and that is priceless

Firstly let me just say, "Khayya Ganokh", you are a truely talented artist and we're all very proud of you.

I quite enjoyed listening to those 14 beats, some of them were excellent, I ended up repeating those ones for a few times.

My favourites were:

Making Love in the Tepee

Jupiter Party (I felt though that the beats were a bit too loud and hence it wasn't easy to listen to the background music, which was very beautiful)

Workout

Dreaming Underwater

Forgive Me

You Gotta Big O Booty

Driving on the Highway

Arabian Adventure

An excellent effort overall, great work mate.

Please, once your album is released, I would be very garetful if you can let me/us know where I can buy it from, as I would be more than glad to support a talented Assyrian artist such as yourself.

Thanks

They all sound great but my favs would be:
I pray
The Getaway
Forgive Me
Driving on the Highway

I have tons of lyrics that I write but just can't ever seem to get the right melody or beat going but I was actually throwing some of my lyrics over while listening to your snippets and they flowed real nice

Good job man!!! Keep it up!!

my fav has to be the the first one, it's soooooo mello 8)

Great Job

listenin to the first one, powerful samples, but the drums don't match up to me... drums don't have the presence of the instrumentation and the overall mix is reaaaaally high. instrumentals definitely should not peak on their, before vocals are recorded and before the final masterin process after the track's been finished and mixed properly... other than that, this beat sounds nice, i do dig the clean, emotional instrumentation.. i jus wish the drums hit harder and came through clearer without necessarily bein louder. hope that feedback helps, best of luck w/ sellin these beats..

peace,
PRIZM
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Hullabaloo - I like the drums on this track a bit better than on the first. I can definitely see a progression in your sequencing skills. Good work. The only thing that sort of throws me off is the "you think that was cool" sample...it's used well enough, I just don't really feel it. That's just me tho.

Melancholic Departure - The name really fits this track. Dunno really what to say that I haven't said already about the other two....good composition, decent drum sequencing...good song overall. Keep doin what you do, man.

Confused Toward Life: Wasn't sure what to expect when the vocal came in.....but WHOA!!! I'm feelin the big sound this one has....real nice strings, nice grimy kicks and drum rolls....The sound is really full....nice work.

Hullabaloo: Wow man.....I assume the vocals are helping the songs transition on the album? If so, great idea. This one has that same big, full sound. I like the epic feel of it, and my only negative criticism is that the vocals in the middle take away from the epic feel.....very solid.....I love the drums.

A Melancholic Departure: Nice strings in the intro. I assume you're playin these? Drums dropped different than I expected. This one doesn't have the same cohesive epic feel as the others....The drums throw that off for me....all the rest of the music is phenomenal. Not to say it isn't nice...it is.....it just didn't gel for me the way the first two did.

Overall man, I'm impressed.......I'm not a huge fan of this genre, but I could easily listen to this.....as far as I can tell, you're in a good spot between hiphop and the "electronic" genres.....

Nice. Lemme know when the album is out.

-O

peace.

beyonce - crazy good beat

it gets better , but then kinda falls off again, u should try to speed up the vocals , u can usaually get em right on point ...i like the beat tho , its mad dynamic

I didnt really wanna peep the beyonce , so im peepin the aaliyah and mobb deep shit

the beat is coo, i like the lloyd beat a bit better tho, i didnt really like the drums in this one ...
prodigy sounds way off, pac sounds a bit better tho...remixing acapellas is hard man, im not gonna hate

coo shit, peace

naughty girl rmx
Good drums again. The melodies don't work with Beyonce's vocals though, the pitch / tune of the instrumental doesn't work with the singing.

Travelers Beat 2 << WOW it kinda scared me haha sci fi shit kinda? its koobut not no lil flip shit lol.. but good issh fam.

Travelers Beat 1 << il ike the groove on this no doubt! this is layed back i could hear some good female vocals an a laidback delivery on this fa show!....keep at it !!!! you got some talent!

2 - i like the faster tempo on this one. not so sure about the little squeaky sounds + blips, but i like the heavy guitars that come in every so often.

3 - not really into the melodies on this 1.

TB 2 - I dont see the Game Over comparisson..but this is cool nonetheless. The heavy metal guitar that you drop in there is crazy. Honestly..I think this beat would be difficult to rap over. But I dunno...maybe your boys can rip it.

TB 3 - The drumming on this beat stands out more than the melodys I think. The strings that kick in the chorus are nice.

Nice stuff Naram. They are all good pieces of music..but Im feeling the Travellers Beat 1 the most.

Keep building mayne.

good shit man!

Instrumental 13 This one deviates from the video game feel a little bit. Still a decent beat. I don't know how you come up with such crazy melodies.

HVA 13 - i dont know how to describe it, its unique. but it doesnt sound bad.

instru 13
upbeat sounding. could be good as a computer game theme or something

Mad vocal shit. like it though.
Can see why you said Crim would like this... this is a nice melodic feel.... better than the majority of what i've heard you do before... this is more of a "Hip Hop" beat than your usual style... quality.
for what it's worth... i think your growing everytime you make a beat. (as an artist i mean) decent.

only problem i have with this, is that some of the drums seem to be out of sequence with the rest of the track,maybe it's just me though.

I do like this man, keep doing what you do to the fullest Nin.

PEACE

You already know all the good things Ive told you about this beat. I couldnt stop complimenting you on what a nice job you did in our conversation on MSN messenger. This is easily one of my favorite beats from you man..those vocal samples just threw another whole element in the beat.

Keep building Tendo...Im always looking forward to hear new music from you.

21 - i pretty much agree with rock on this joint

but 22 is real nice... it's one of the most "spitable" beats i've heard from ya... the drums is knocking and the violin and piano is TIGHT... probably could use some bass somewhere... but it's maybe one of the best beats i've peeped of yours... definitely could work with it...

part 21 - this reminds me of something, can't quite put my finger on it. not bad, good drumwork again. the instruments still seem a bit over-electronic for my tastes, if u get me.

BRAVO!!

*edit* i forgot to say..an extra bonus in this one - NO VIDEOGAME SOUNDS!!

Now to this amazing composition: Wow man...wow. I heard a part of this song awhile back and it blew me away. The final version is solid man. I can feel the emotion you put into this and you didnt even have to drop vocals. Bottom line is, this song is amazing. Keep up the excellent work my friend.

Appriciates

*plays track again*

I like it, it's creative. Better than your other stuff in my opinion cause it doesn't have all those synths and straight off the cheap keyboard sounds you use on your melodies.

.......1

yeah, i like the drums..

BUT naram. some advice, although we know you like the nintendo 'gamine' type sounds, you should remember you needa try noew things, keep it fresh.

this si a great piece of work, dont get me wrong. but u needa try someting new in my opinion.

i really like the drumwork, very heavy. still, the computer game thing isn't my cup of tea at all, but each to his own.

The drums are outta control (in a good way). The riff / melody is niice. it's kinda dark with an, er, well - an arabian touch. You've mastered what you set out to do in this one. More props.

Peace

GOD? CRIMINAL A NUN? ZEXEL PRAISIN PEOPLES 'N' ISH? WTF?

Yeah Nin, i do like this beat. It's a banger. Best i've heard produced since i been on here from the master of games playing. The drums are hella nice. And that yell effect type shit you got goin on in the background on the loop is dope to. It's a weird track though, aint know wether to feel sad, contemplate life, think about bitches or convert with Zexel and Crim!

Dope man, keep doin ya thing dude.
Nice to see the amount of feedback in this thread too! Now i'ma go subscribe at sohh.com for daily MC Jesus and the DJ disciples updates. Their new lp's gonna be the shit, they got a collaboration with Lazarus, Moses and Vanilla Ice!!

i quite like this. drum sequence is a bit too simple throughout for my liking, but i like the fills with the crashes and cymbals a lot. ha, zexel was on-point with the holy thing....i'm off to become a nun.

nice track, just not too keen on the computer sounds

as for the track itself...i can still tell it was done by you, man. lol. it's got Naramsin written all over it. the tom drum that you used...i probably would have chosen a different sound, but that's just me. this one works ok. nice melodies once again, and like i said earlier, i'm loving that singing thing. good job.

some of the stuff you did on it is interesting- use some delay on the snare and see what it does for you- check out afrika bambaata's planet rock for the specific delay style i'm talking about...... the snare in that song would help your version as well.

I would have went a bit more bassy on the kicks, and maybe a bit stronger of a snare (or including a snare at all, for that matter, even sporadically). But yeah, i like it. 7.5 out of 10.

Would like to see a young mc put some vocals over this, it would be a challenge to suit the mood and all.

Keep Up the good work guys.

Peace.