commenting whilest listening...

starts off nice...
nice vox, they sound well...

bassline is a little to hard house for me...
lead seems a little weak to start off with...
kick is nice...
wanna turn the volume down on that hihat

at 1min 13 when u bring the riff in full.. you tried a bassdrop?
or u using a sample for bass?

perc needs a little more EQ... you need some wood perc in here as well

got any nice fx? wooshing sounds...

liking the 303 sounding noise on the break down...
lead could still be a little harder...

crash could do with some reverb
I like the build up to this tune... riff needs to be louder thou bro!

nice lil drum roll
Seems weak when it all comes in together
Definatly wanna get that riff a little more powerful
and as I said, try that bassline drop...

drop it like the alphazone riff does...

nice track thou for 4 hours work

hope my comments help..

a bit light for me imo

but in all fairness VERY WELL MADE...
it is a good track to listen to but i like it a bit harder but really good effort and a crackin tune for those who like it like this!!

Keep it up

Not my style but nicly made tune. ide give it a 8/10 only because its not my thing like. do u Produce hardstyle as i seen ur influances on sound clik are mondello blutonium ect??

sounds okay kiwi m8. time to lay down some serious sound. class vocal. i had it the other day.
bass and synths are wicked. the kick needs more tweaking i think and the hats with a lil more top end.

all in all a wicked tune. aint heard the orig but am liking this one.

nice one fella

Within the first 30 seconds i'm quite diggin this! Not really a fan of House or Electro..if that's what this is I don't know Laughs out loud Anyway its good my man, can't believe you did it in an hour! Good job.

Keep me posted if you do anymore

J

Like the kick...not much build to the bass, altho bass is nice...lead sounds a bit thin & mayb a bit too quiet, try layering some synths or mayb try eq it a bit better...gets a bit repetative after a while, maybe add some bass changes or some stabs, or even a sub riff to fill it up a bit..breakdown is a bit basic but works..perhaps add some sweeps or something to build it up some more..then again when it kicks back in the bass does not change with the riff, defo needs to change with a riff like this, would add more drive to the track..

Nice track tho, alot of good ideas in there, think it just needs filling out a bit more..

What software/VSTi's are you using?

It's got potential but my main criticsm would be that the bassline stays on the one key rather than going up and down with the riff. Getting the bassline right is soo important when it comes to hard trance because that's what drives the tune and keeps the track from being monotamous and boring.

As I have said before though, it's defo got the potential!

Keep it up dude.

Sounds professional enough, but it also sounds like 90% of other harddance tracks out there.

I'm not sure the riff is powerful / interesting enough to sustain such a primal role either.

Regrettably i think its the harddance cliches and tried and tested samples that save the tune as it offers the listener some familiarity in an otherwise un-eventful track.

alright dude

had a listen to your warehouse tune - like what you've done with it but needs some work..

it's very simple in terms of percussion.. get some more busy hi-hats and individual perc elements in there to really get a groove going..

also think you could do a lot more with the lead sound - fatten it up by layering a vaz or something under there and giving it that big-riff sound that the original so lacked...

but in terms of production it's pretty hot.. one thing i'll say though is that when you put that the tune took you less than two hours - it makes it look like you're just rushing through the tune to get it done and taking no time over it.. let the creativity flow naturally, don't rush and i think it will show in your music..

hope what i've put is useful, i reckon you have some hot potential Thumbs up

Kris