Ohgrant:Awesome, Great production!! You gave her a great canvass to produce the most artistic thing I have heard in a long time. her dark and melodic voice gave me goose bumps through the whole song. I think she most certainly raises the bar for vocals for this type of metal. IMO this is the Goth queen!!
Cbman:Yeah, it's pretty sick indeed
Cherryvsowers:Great Vocals and Production! Love this!Etm78:Great sounds dude... GOTH.. you made a great recordings for the song.. I like the dark mid of the guitar.. I dig it... awesome ... female vocals is fit with the attitude of the song. GREAT JOB!

Very good distortion going on, I like! What hardware/software setup are you using? Sounds a bit like DX10 synths. Don't really care for the snare, but that's also probably because I don't listen to much Industrial as a rule.

Samples are, on the whole, intact and clear as a bell. Hats near the end could use a little compression, but that's just an idea.

Like the vocal samples, although I would kind of like to know what they're saying to get a better jist of the song. (Btw, I definitely get the Marilyn Manson similarities).

Good guitar & distortion, etc. Around 1:45 is a little to random for my taste, but again, I hardly ever listen to Industrial, so it's hard to critique that.

Overall, the song has a lot of value. Listening to it creeped me out a little, but I guess in this genre that's a good thing.