Damn girl you surprised me ya song had me zoned out while I was blazin'. I gotta get you 2 bless a track 4 me I promise it'll be commercial. I play da first one on yah board like back 2 back I fixin 2 go smoke and listhen 2 it now. Where should I go 2 let everybody know how tight that song is. Yah Boi. ConTaC
I saw your message board post and if you don't continue 2 amaze me I could have swore da next thing I would get from u was (DATS IT) LOL
But keep doin' U shawty U kinda remind me of "Reese" don't know how 2 spell her name
Only thing I'ma say 2 U is U need 2 keep droppin dat fire

First let me say that your vocal sounds great on this track, but the synth melody gets in the way badly, In the second half sounds Good. Take out those synth parts and I think this is a real winner. When those harmonies come in, shivers!

Basically sharma your a genious, In all honestly I really like this. With some editing out of the synths, this would be such a strong track, 2nd part of the song is so good!

You should add some nice string sounds that would compliment the stronger sections of the composition that WILL NOT GET in the way of the melody!

Mike truely created a wonderful composition, as an instrumental the synth works but with a real vocal melody it becomes a drag to the piece. I hope you understand what I mean...

You were wonderful, the vocal was very good! The melody was superb!!

Cameron

I'm listening to your Yesterday's song again. I actually have this added to one of my cds I listen to on my way to work. Your voice is so so so peaceful, I love it.

I have to say my favorite is your work in progress "Don't let the Sunlight". As soon as I played it and heard the strumming you lured me in. I agree it should be a little more upbeat but not too much. I really like the sound of it now.

I might be a little weird on why I like certain songs. Lyrics are important to me. A heart filled message will always lure me in but if the song doesn't catch my ear I get turned away to quickly. It could be the most beautifully written song but if It's poorly sung or arranged I just get turned off before giving it a chance. Is that weird? Hmm what is my point here anyway. I'm doing the rambling thing and getting sidetracked again, grrr.

Someone Somewhere
Again this one lured me in right away too. I listened to this way back when you reviewed our songs. Your song gave me hope in finding someone. I was really depressed back then too and this lifted my spirits. Anyway I thank you for this song. It helped me out. Wow I Love the soft, sweet, heaveenly voice. It really is unique.

Also i am curious what equipment you use for your recordings? Oh and I'm mad at you for Yesterdays are gone That one hit home a little too much. I love your voice. Its different. Not sure how to explain it but its rather soothing and peaceful.

Hey Sharma Kay, what is going on sister? OK, I listened to a bunch of your tunes, specifically:

Yesterday's are Gone
Soul Mates
Sun will Rise
Let Love Go
Don't let the Sunlight
Someone Somewhere
Cowboys Ride Again

First of all, I understand so well your love of music and your need to be validated, I feel precisely the same way. I am one who needs a gentle push and some words of encouragement because it never sounds good enough to me.

So, I say with sincere heartfelt honesty...Never stop creating Music girlfriend! It isn't difficult to see that music is therapeutic for you (and for most of us) and that in itself is enough to make singing and songwriting a part of your life -- one that should always be a part of your journey.

Your voice is silky and has good range. In fact, one of my favorite moments is during 'Sun will Rise' when you reach down in the lower register -- reminded me of Aimee Mann there! (if your not intimate with her, check her out, unreal writing http://www.aimeemann.com/home.html

The songs are sweet and simple and brimming with honesty and a personal touch that allows the listener into your life. There is a gospel, traditional country sort of undertone in the songs -- I can imagine folks sitting around a campfire and singing along. I was also reminded of the soundtrack to 'Oh Brother Where art Thou?'

In closing, I would recommend trying to form a band where you can really flesh out your vocal skills and writing. A guitar player with some vocal abilities and an upright bass would be awesome. Imagine how you could develop those songs! Also, better equipment (I know, captain obvious here) would really make everything sweeter. It ain't cheap (I know, I've spent a fortune in that last few months) it ain't easy to master, but it makes a big difference and offers an infinite number of opportunities to add to your creations. Just imagine some strings in Yesterday's are Gone? Or some vintage Wurlitzer organ in Sun will Rise? -- it would be a great movie soundtrack piece.

Life is a Symphony
get your heart in tune
with the love that flows
through infinity....

David (the Benevolent Dictator)

Hey Sharma,

Anybody ever tell you that you must be the most considerate person on Soundclick

I really appreciate your detailed critiques, your the only one I know who is willing and has the ability to strip a track down and pick apart the performance, recording and song! Yet say it in a way that I know your trying to help! I really appreciate the honesty in that, cause when you say you dont like something you can say why and that is really helpful to me cause there nothing worse then unconstructive critism and your critism is very constructive. I truly appreciate every word, even the bits about my voice

Now if I only looked like a backstreet boy lol...

Thanks again,
Cameron

PS: Tell me if the new PS5 works better and use that user group for all there worth!, dont be afraid to just ask if theres a problem little or big too, they dont mind at all!! There a good bunch really, quite comical at times!

Another Day
Wow so this was a poem written to you? I have to say your voice is one of the few that can get me in a relaxed state. I'm always feeling so stressed out or antsy. Actually right now I am really antsy and this song is settling me down. I like the attempt of harmonzing. Alot better than I can do with John thats for sure but then you have a voice, I don't.

Sharma-
Another Day #2-

This one sounds like something else I've reviewed tonight. Seems that Mike has had some major influence on the composition of this one.

I like the lyrics a lot. The vocal is real Karen Carpenter type stuff. I really like the high-notes especially. Nice trill. It reminds me of a rainy day, so I'd have to say it has good audio-imagery. As with a lot of Sharma songs, there is a constant thread of underlying sorrow mixed with default optimism that things will get better, and they could be worse.

The production on this piece is top-notch, and the harmonic mixture and texture of the vocals is perfect. I like the interaction of the guitar and vocals.

SONG RATING 1-10:
Music:
(Composition) 7
(Application) 7
Lyrics:
(Composition) 7
(Application) 8

Overall Rating: 7.75
L

Artist: Sharma Kay
Title: The Sun Will Rise
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Here's someone making a big splash, at least on the Soundclick forums. Sharma appeared a while ago and made some very influential friends very quickly. When I was browsing her website getting ready for this review, I noticed that at least two of the tracks on there had the prints of one Rey Varela all over them. If that connection doesn't say a lot, I don't know what does.

The Sun Will Rise is essentially an acoustic vocal number (ie guitar and vocals only) and I've always found the best way to judge them is by their own lights. See, the problem is that I've never really been that keen on that whole 'Joni Mitchell'' folksy approach and that was what my first impressions of this track were. Having grown up banging my head on the bass bins of rock, rock and a little bit more rock, I loikes my meat rare....

Eeeeewww, do you mind? There's a lady present... Sorry Sharm....

However with advancing senility comes a greater awareness of what it costs us to bare our souls this way, so I listened further. Sharma plays the guitar merely to accompany her voice and lyrics so there isn't really a lot to be said for it, except she manages some difficult passages with ease. It's her voice though that finally registers with me; a deep, rich voice that this track really does nothing to show just how rich it could sound. However, that's the smallest niggle and - as we all know - its the track that counts. Now seeing as I don't really like this genre I could certainly stand to hear some more of this singer, which I may well do by sucking up one of the Varela-daubed tracks..

As they say, watch this space...

I woke up this morning to a plesant surprise.....
No, actually I heard sommething this morning that just made my day and probably will carry with me forever since it's something I can take with me where ever I go.......
....A song
Yep a song, such a simple thing isn't it, one of the basic elements of life since time began......

This yet to be titled work of art that is Sharma Kay's latest effort which mind you came out of the past is, in my opinion, one of her best!
Plain and simple.....

Sting's "Every Breath You Take" is a perfect example of this...simple but profound!

Speaking of simple, it amazes me to hear what can be done with such simple structure...two chords, played in a finger picking style. That within itself is quite amazing BUT then something special happens, Sharma's vocal comes in and like magic....no not that everyday magic, I mean that defining moment when you know you've stumbled upon greatness!

Her subtleness, her breathy vocal is mesmerizing and all the more beauty in her little quirks....
Quirks are character signatures....she knows exactly what shes doing, she's pulling the heartsrtings of the listener....Mindy Smith is expert at this, she doesn't try to do this, it is her through and through, she is what she is!
Sharma is right up there with Mindy on this piece, she only does what comes natural to her and it shows in ways that can not be put into words, you MUST experience this for yourself......   Lord knows my feeble attempt to characterize in words what I am hearing and feeling is far from accurate!

Another amazing thing is the vagueness of the lyrics, they are somewhat abstract, I had a sneek preview of these a week ago when she posted them on my board a week ago.   I've had some time to dwell on them for a while and you could imagine how surprised I was to hear how beautifully they could be expressed, especially since I, frankly have been stumped by their meaning!

*Flash* This just in........... I have been informed by way of Sharma's site that upon my suggestion the song has been named "Yesterdays are Gone"....Cool, there's now a name for this work of art!

Go have a listen and see for your self there's no other way to get the full impact of what I am trying to describe!

Peace

Anyways but the sound of fether you can sing. I think that you could elaborate on all your lyrics, but so can everyone right? You can say simplistic things and still come off deep. It goes back to what you feel.

So Anyways best of luck and life to you
PEACE OUT!

soulmates :
i think the music's very well composed, and the lyrics, although basic, are very communicative and fit in well with the rest of the song. the piano player (is it you?) does'nt do a bad job either, and merges with the mood of the song. the vocals are nearly perfect, with few flaws. that you've been practicing shows, and a remaster would be a great idea.

sun will rise :
the first thing that strikes me abt this is the quality of the guitarwork, with parameters like loudness and velocity of each note in good control. i did'nt pay much attention to the lyrics, i'm afraid, good music tends to distract me, but i can tell it's very uplifting from the few phrases i catch here and there.

let love go :
it's embarassing to admit, but this is my kind of tune, were i in the mood for the genre. i love the lyrics, and the vocals only serve to complement them, accurate as far as i could see. were you smiling a lot while you sung this? because i think i could hear something very close.
this i'll listen to again at the end of the reviews

don't let the sunlight :
decent rythm, lyrics sound a TAD too basic, but maybe i'm just being picky. i love the way you change the tempo of the song very subtly throughout at strategic points, giving the song a definite edge in terms of expression. this was the least impressive of your songs, atleast from the four that i listened to. the vocals were a little weak as well, which sort of stuck out, because i found them perfect in all the other songs. but those are'nt problems a retake or two could'nt iron out : )

Listened to "Father." The sound quality was, -sorry- awful. You've got to get your recording technique up to speed. You are too talented to be trapped in the limited format you've been working in. Your melodic sense is excellent. Lyrically I think you should break this song into 2. The first time I listened, my mind wandered and all of a sudden he was there for you and all was well. I think if you explore the ideas in the 1st part some more, you'll have a real powerful tune. Save the good feelings and "Dad is my hero" for another song. In this age of broken families, you'll find a huge audience.

(Actually, Jim said in a following paragraph that his mind didn't actually "wander", but out of respect for him, I'll leave that part out.)

Hi Sharma,
I don't know if this appropiate but I wanted to share with you an experience I had tonight. I've kind of been in a funk tonight, I dunno just feeling off so I came home early from work and I thought about of playing guitar. Well instead, I thought, first I will go to your page and listen to some of you're songs and that is when it happened....I got calm instantly and I relaxed as I closed my eyes......Then slowly I could feel it from all around...a warmth that overcame me! as if though the sun had lightly kissed me with ray of light........

Your voice started to soothe my soul as I listen to the words....slowly uraveling like a butterfly's newly born wings for the very first time!!!

Wow, what an experience, not often does a voice have such an effect me! In lieu of babbling uncontrolably I'm gonna stop now and just say...... Thank You. That is the greatest gift that someone could give to another...
Rey

(Rey... I hope you don't mind me posting this to my review page... it really touched me, and reading it makes me feel so much better.)

I like this song. At the beginning I was hearing some power guitar chords in the background and other orchestration. One of the truest things I ever read was, "Great songs aren't written, they are rewritten." So you want to avoid some of the criticism you've rec'd about your lyrics. First of all they are not "crap." You don't write crap - yeah I saw the post. I'm very sensitive to corny or dumb lyrics and the only thing that bothers me about the lyrics is the word, "Soulmates." It has become almost corny in our culture. I used the term in my band description about me and Lisa until a few weeks ago when I removed it for that reason. If you can find a new way of saying the same thing, it wouldn't carry the baggage that "soulmates" carries. Alan Parson's used the word "Gemini." (darn him) Just off the top of my head: we are twinned souls, we are bound by soul, we are one soul (my fav of these); any number of this type of substitution could work well with the song as it is. I bet if you think about what the term "soulmates" really means for a couple days, something nice will come to you.

I'm not crazy about the melody around 2:56. It's a bit churchy. I also think that you could edit the lyrics down a bit. I started getting lost in all the words. I really like this. It sounds more like a Pop ballad than folk. This would be a really good one to develop with your new tools.

Instead of churchy, I could have said that you used a chord progression and resolution of the melody that sounded very baroque or even Bach-like. It's only for a few seconds, but it sounds out of place for the rest of the tune which has a pop ballad sound.

Wonderful song. Love the beginning with the piano. No nasty hiss there.

It seems to be associated with the electronic keyboard string fills. Maybe a bad connection or too big of a patch with the volume up, or maybe just a low quality keyboard that is not compatible with your other recording equipment. I can't really tell from a listener perspective - not knowing your recording configuration. Items to consider though - does the hissing dissappear if the keyboard is pulled from the mix? Are the effects on the vocal itself or after the fact? Are you wearing headphones during the vocal recordings or is sound from the room (keys in particular) bleeding through?

I noticed a couple of spots where the vocal didn't seem to fit with the flow of the song and they get off time. I like the lyrics but changing them slightly, or changing your inflection to fit the flow of the song might be a thought.

Anyway, thanks for sharing your music and keep on working at it. We all have time.

Sharma Kay-
Soul Mates-
This is a nice ballad. The pinao arrangement is very personable and the strings hanh back and provide some low-end support. The vocal-part is a bit rough from a production stand-point, but great from a performance stand-point.

I love the use of vibrato in the vocals. A lot of people who have the ability to use vibrato in their voices tend to overdo it and it ends up getting on the nerves after a while. You handled the vibrato with taste and descretion.

The lyrics lend themselves well to this type song. Kind of syrupy and warm and fuzzy feeling. Almost a Carpenters type styled song in my opinion. The chorus especially has the 70's AM rasio feel to it, but that's in no way a bad thing.

Other than the production values, I can't really find much about this song that doesn't work. Its not so much my style of song, but I can hear the honesty in the composition and the performance. I can't wait till you get the equipment you're waiting on. I think then we will get to hear some really shiney stuff.

SONG RATING 1-10:
Music:
(Composition) 7
(Application) 6
Lyrics:
(Composition) 6
(Application) 7

Overall Rating: 6.5
L

Hey Sharma,

Very cool first name!:) Never heard that one before. I like to cruise Soundclick and check out other indie's from time to time. Happened upon your site, and I must say I'm sure glad I did!:)

Just listed to "Soul Mates" and "Sun Will Rise". You've got an amazing voice, and the piano playing is very fluid and melodic too.   The guitar playing on "Sun Will Rise" is well done. A from-the-heart vocal performance too.

It's so nice to hear a woman with a natural voice like yours. Your vocals remind me a bit of Carole King and Carly Simon. I mean that as a
compliment!:)

Keep up the great work!:) Must be great living in a beautiful city like Portland with majestic Mt. Hood gazing upon you day after day eh?

Peace,
Brett Service
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

i am still listening to you.. i think your best vocal performance was father.. something about that.. what you are trying to do vocally comes across the most natural and realized out of the bunch.. there are things like the extreme amounts of bass in the guitar.. and how it was recording.. but that's okay with me.. i'm focusing on what you are trying to convey... but something about your voice.. sounds beautiful.. i wonder if it was the lyrical subject.. the time of day you recorded. your emotional being... if you were more relaxed or what not.. if the conditions for recording were somehow different then the other pieces.. it's not my fav song.... i think the sun will rise song is my favorite.. but somehow.. i think your father song comes out as your best felt one to me..

i'll be listening more..
daniel..

Sharma Kay - Soul Mates

I miss your guitar on this piano ballad. I like the dark feel to the melody, which adds depth and existential angst to the upbeat lyric. I’m still a little conflicted about whether I like this style of lyric writing, but this one seems to have a bit more depth than the last – I think that the melody and some of the lyrics add a kind of fascinating ambivalence to the song. This one comes closer than some of your others to the kind of archetypal feel that you’ve got to have if you’re going to embrace cliché (heaven’s gate, room to breath, etc.). Still, a little bit of concrete imagery might perk things up.

2.75 Stars (out of 4)

Hi Darlin'
Wish the keyboard could be just a bit louder, as the music is so beautiful, maybe it is my system???!
Looking forward to the song you wrote when you were about 16 yrs old--one of your first seven--"A Cowboy rides again." One of the special attributes in your songs is the unexpected "hook" one is not aware is coming until it has passed "carrying you along". Your natural Charisma has always sent "shivers" down my spine. You have a God given talent to make any song sound special, but the songs you write from your heart, touches deep within ones own sole. I always reflect on what life has dealt me in more loving & positive way after hearing your sweet voice & the lyrics that always seem to hold a different special meaning everytime you hear them. It is like the stories that are ongoing because the can have a different ending. So it is with the way you can touch a persons heart. I personally am greatful that you have discovered this website that is giving you such encouragment, support & inspiration to continue your music. Yours is truly a special gift, and one that must be shared!!! Never, never, stop sharing your insight in such a beautiful creative way. Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou.

Sharma Kay – Sun Will Rise

I’m impressed with the guitar playing – simple but effective fingerpicking that’s very premeditated and organized. You take your guitaring very seriously, as I realized when I read your upbraiding of a fellow artist on your thread for squeaky finger slides (but hey, when I was a kid I thought that Aerosmith must be a better band than Zeppelin because “Stairway to Heaven” had squeaky slides, but “Dream On” didn’t), and subsequently saw one of my solos described as “attempted rock.” The melodies are great, and the singing improves over the course of the song, as it often does in songs that are recorded live. Your voice, when it’s focused, is fantastic, especially in the last verse and chorus.

However, I can’t help thinking that the lyrics, although earnest, and adequate for sketching out the thoughts and feelings described in the song, fall too heavily on “moon in June” cliches and lack the vivid real-world imagery that can bring a song to life. I was actually surprised to read your review thread after hearing what I consider to be your relatively vague lyrics, and find it so incisive, detailed and varied. I mean, don’t you write about a guy who can “hold a note as long as Barbara Streisand” in one of your songs, or something about dracula, men in white coats and angry whales, to paraphrase some of your posts? I’m not trying to knock your lyric writing, and I couldn’t write a song about matters of the heart to save my bitter little life, but I think you have what it takes to take it to a different level if you can make it more concrete.

2.75 Points (out of 4)

Sharma Kay
"..music is such a pure form of self-expression, and lyrics, because they consist of words, are so impure, and songwriters, even great ones ... , find that, even though they can produce both, words will always let you down." --Nick Hornby

this quote came to mind while listening to Sharma Kay's music. not that her lyrics are bad at all, it just seems as though there is a stronger, deeper emotion that the songwriter is attempting to conjur but hasn't totally tapped into yet. at least that emotion hasn't totally been detailed to the listener just yet. the issue may not be lyrics at all; maybe more instrumentation is all that's needed. i just don't find the lyrics to be strong enough to carry the songs by themselves.

and its only the occassional lyric that bothers me. for instance, in "Sun Will Rise," which is probably my favorite track musically, the line "Time won't stop for anyone" has already been used in more songs than I can count. i think its fair to say that this line should be retired. however, the rest of the lyrics are strong enough to offset this minor detail.

"Father" has the most interesting subject matter. when songs are more specific and less general they tend to be much more potent. Dave Egger's once said (and this is actually from the same book I took the quote above from) that people listen to songs over and over in order to "solve" them. if songs are too general, they're too easy to solve. not that listening to music should be like doing long division, but its not a bad thing to require a listener to be a very active one.

"Don't Let the Sunlight" is an excellent song. It has, for want of a better word, a crapload of potential. its catchy and lyrically its solid. i think given a Pet Sounds-type arrangement, this song could be quite enjoyable.

6.3/10 for "Don't Let the Sunlight"
5.2/10 for the rest

Sharma, Sharma, Sharma!!!!!! Although you may find it hard to believe, I listen to all kinds of music. I love your voice and hte way it kind of just draws you in. My favorite was Someone Somewhere. Keep it up and good luck. I will mos def be back to check you out.

Hey Sharma,
I couldn't agree more with Rey, the sunshine man!!! You have one of the most beautiful voices I've come across on SoundClick, or anywhere else, for that matter. I totally agree with Rey's pick for the month!!! I'll pick you for the rest of the year as well. Very, very nice!!!
Take care!
Mike
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Mike Kohlgraf

Very nice guitar playing, singing, and songwriting craft. It is sooo hard to keep in time fingerpicking thru a whole tune with no mistakes. I can't do it at all. I'll give you some more feedback when I can. I will say that when you can fill out your songs and edit the parts, you'll kick some serious butt. I'm sooo jealous, ... it's obvious that singing comes naturally for you. Lisa's like that too, a one take wonder.

What can I say about this artist.....

When I listen to her music I hear great things, I hear the smoothness of her vocal style similar as I have said elswhere to Karen Carpenter but with the understated yet powerful vocal quality of Mindy Smith!s

She sings each and every word with such detail...listen and you will hear the petals of a Rose as they fall to the earth with a graceful and gentle "kiss".......

Therefore my first pick for the month of June 2004 is: Sharma Kay

I'll let the music do the talking.......I needn't say more!
Peace

"Don't let the sunrise"
Very emotional song. Coming from the heart, great lyrics. Great voice. Country isn't really my style, but I can listen to some of it. Overall, like you said its a rough draft. Could use a little work here and there, but everyone can use work somewhere in a song. Keep singing

you have a pretty voice, too. i guess i like music that sounds "new". but, obviously, there are plenty of people who like traditional music as well, so i think you wouldn't have trouble finding an audience. a couple of the rhymes on "someone somewhere" were a little predictable, but i don't really write lyrics so i don't think i could do better. otherwise well-crafted songs. god, this is probably the worst review anyone's ever written.

I listened to some of your songs and really liked your voice, and especially your song "Don't let the sun...", I think that with the proper arrangements (up the tempo, add a jangling guitar and some backing vocals) it could be a pop hit (pop, in a classic way; not today's pop).

BTW, I think 2 1/2 minutes is the perfect length for a pop song; usually it doesn't need to be longer; but if you have the need to do that way and find a catchy arrangement for the chorus, just repeat it 1 or 2 times at the end, perhaps with slightly variations on the backing vocals or the drums. Just my opinion, I really think that song has great potential.

very nice sound.. was the name actually what pulled me in.. sharma..
there is some connection between your voice, words, and guitar that is rare.. keep it up..
just another screamy jeebie
Daniel Park

Hi Sweetie!!

It absolutely astounds me how you can say this song is "It's a rough draft",when it is so PERFECT!!

You have an epitome (rt word??)for understatements when it comes to your talents, & sweetness.

This is a beautiful song that sends shivers up & down my spine. I am so proud of you!! All I can add is Keep it up, you always bring me such joy & amazment.

Bill likes your songs also. He even attempted to down load, but did not know how, or that I had already down loaded to his computer.

This is exciting. I so very much would like to give you additional inspiration and encouragment, but I just don't know how, except to say, you are truly amazing!!

Mom

Hi Sharma,

I by no means would qualify myself as an experienced reviewer but I have been playing and singing for a long time so I hope the following reviews are of value to you. The funny thing is, our ears, as with our general taste, are so individual that the things I hear in your songs may or may not also be perceived by other listeners. Anyway here goes:

Let Love Go

First off my overall impression of this song is that I liked it. The overall feel was reminiscent of a Dylan song (specifically a blowing in the wind feel to it). It has a nice melody line and the guitar picking is crisp and clear. The downside to this is that the vocals sound a little too forced in that they don't sound like they are flowing naturally, to my ears. The lyrics themselves are good and convey the story of the song well.

Sun Will Rise

Again I like the feel of this song. The vocals flow well in this piece and the vibrato is used well in the voice and is not overdone. The melody line is catchy and the mix of vocals to guitar volume is just right. There is a strong storytelling aspect which raises the enjoyment of the song. The only negative aspect I picked out was that one of the strings on the guitar is fractionally flat which stands out more so as the song progresses.

Hope this is helpful to you and thankyou once again for taking the time to listen to some of my stuff. Happy playing

Euan

Hey Sharma

I listened to Someone Somewhere, it was good the chorus again was my fav. part which is good cause thats the way it should be! Its quite catchy its stuck in my head, in a good way of course.

I think the reverb sounded pretty good, I didnt think it was too much, but then again Im notorious for adding to much reverb

Sharma-
The Sun Will Rise-

First of all, dial that reverb down way low. Your voice is just fine. I'm probably as guilty as anyone on hiding behind reverb, but I've learned that it tends to get in the way more than help. I like it on the guitar, but the vocal is getting clouded by it. There are certain effects units that offer a pre-delay on the reverb which allows a more natural reverb. If your just using the setting from the PC, then your pretty much stuck with it.

The problem with the reverb that most people have is that the sounds are automatically coming out with reverb on them. It's a lot like talking with an echo automatically sounding. In nature the echo comes out after the noise is made, not simultaneously. I got that tip from someone here on site, and used it to good effect on my latest CD. I'll have to look back to see who it was and thank him for the tip, because it makes all the difference in the world.

Now, the song.

This is a beautiful piece of work. The music is simple but not elementary. The lyrics are beautifully written and the vocal more than does them justice. Was this recorded live? If so then its a really remarkable arrangement.

Even if the vocal was dubbed, its still pretty impressive. I think a piano in the mid-section would help, if you ever re-cut this one. As it stands, its a very honest song, beautifully executed. It has a few minor flaws, but nothing to really stress over at this point in the game.

I would like to hear this one with some harmonies added as well. There are mega-spaces available for that.

The general feel of the song is somewhat depressing, but if the listener looks past that, it does have an air of inspiration to it. It has a nice anmbience to it, but that's probably because of the sparce arrangement. Personally, this is the way I like to hear songs. Stripped down to their bones and honestly just played and sung, and let the chips fall.

Really genuine organic music of a thoughtful nature. Not too sweet, not too introspective. A good balance.

SONG RATING 1-10;
Music:
(Composition) 7
(Application) 7
Lyrics:
(Composition) 7
(Application) 7

Overall Rating: 7

Thanks for listening! I checked your stuff out too. You're a strong writer. I like the honesty and soul in your songs, it's hard to pull off sometimes with just an acoustic and vocals but you do it nicely. I can certainly relate to some of your themes.

my fave is "The Sun Will Rise" it is just gorgeous!

i found you from cruising the Soundclick forums. i enjoyed reading your reviews, n i checked several of the artists out. i am not a musician at all, i just love n appreciate all kinds of music.

i coulda swore in your first post you said you weren't a musician, but just a listener, but that you'd review artists. then, i think on the second page, to my surprise, you suggested someone might listen to your stuff. so, course i had to go check it out! n guess what? you ARE TOO a musician/song writer/composer/singer!!!!!!

WOW! simply stunning! you have a beautiful voice with a honey like quality. i love the composition of your songs, the guitar is very pretty.

you should add some things on your webpage about you. it is a lovely page. you are beautiful, too, on top of it all!

Hey Sharma,
What a beautiful song, you truely have a gift, communicating a feeling thats so complex as this song. But yet vague enough to connect with people of all backgrounds. The chorus is really making me choke up, I cant connect to terribly much with the verses but that chorus is really doing its duty.

Your guitar playing is really quite good, you have a good connection with the guitar, which has been said already but really your playing is very well suited to your genre. Im amazed at how solid of musicians are in this type of genre, and your one of them. Sure maybe you cant play a finger flying solo but the roots of the instrument is all that really matters with songs of this quality, the rest is just filler.

Also, great voice! I love the natural tone quality of your voice its very soothing and pure, performed super!

Simply great sharma,
Cameron

SHARMA,
You are such a turd! (just quoting a certain person I met recently) lol, Now your doing it to "me",wow, that hasn't happened to me since I first heard Mindy Smith live! I mean your performance is not only flawless it's pulling on my heart-strings, the goose-bumps formed instantly from the moment your angelic voice floated over top of that 12 string, you've brought tears to my eyes this morning! I've hit the play button six times so far!!!!

Ok, where do I start....I'll start with your vocal, your phrasing is priceless from the way you break the lyrics down, example: you have this little pause just as you finish the first line of the second verse where you sing ""Don't" feel wrong for what you thought was right for you" to the little nuances like the first time you sing "And I know that there is someone right for me",(that just melts me, the way you sing that!) you have it don't you! I knew it, you have the gift...But then you knew it too, didn't you?

I am so happy you turned the reverb down, I can hear the details of your beautiful voice, and guess what the recording is perfect for this song...please, please, please do not take this song down, leave it there for everyone to hear, this performance is a gem and your hard work has paid off!!

God I wish I could do that, you have inspired me to try harder with my vocals to hit those notes and pay attention to phrasing, it is so important to do that, it makes the difference between a good performance and a timeless recording!

Wow, I have to fully absorb this before I listen to "Someone Somewhere"

Have you heard Mindy Smith? if you haven't I'd like to share a song of hers so you'll see what I mean by "the gift". I'll send you a link shortly..

Thank You, Sharma for sharing this, you're shining like the brightest star in the evening sky!!!

PS I left you a message on your artist page message board on the damage done (lol) when I listened to "Father Where Were You"

SHARMA!!!!
The Sun Will Rise:
Very and I mean VERY good voice..excellent lyrics too. Love the arpeggiated chords..I play a lot of songs that way (fingers get tired quick) ..You pulled it off really well. The best advice I could give you as far as recording goes would be this: When recording vocals, I find it best to put them in the center, it keeps them out of the music , in turn , I usually record the main guitar twice (playing exactly the same) and pan one recording to the left and the other to the right. Just those steps alone will improve the sound of your recording alot, and also it may even lessen the effect of the reverb, make it less noticeable. The tune itself is Wonderful..great job!

Don't Worry 'Bout Me:
Another extremely well written song..very thoughtful lyrics. Vocals and Guitars again are great! I would love to hear you singing a song with full-on production..I bet you have a good screaming voice too!!!

Anyway, other than the vocal being panned to the right, Excellent tune!

Sharma, I really look forward to hearing more from you!! Keep up the good work!

Mike

Ah yeah i'm listening to your stuff too. It's pretty good. I'm not really into acoustic folk but I say it's good. The vocals sound good and i actually understand them (i think). good job

8/10?

Hi Sharma,
Love your style. Very honest and warm. Nice, thoughtful lyrics and haunting melodies. Especially like "Someone" and "Where Were You"

Yeah I like the originality.
-MINLUS+

Of course your songs are great.

Hello, Sharma! I listened to your "Sun" song, and the melody and lyrics are beautiful. Right now, with just the guitar, it sounds on the folk side(if there has to be a label put on it), but with added instrumentation, I imagine your songs could delve into the alt genre, a.k.a. Sarah McLachlan, etc. You are a wonderful songwriter, and I look forward to listening to more! Thanks so much for sharing your music! Always, Tiffany Rae.

Hey Great stuff, I saw Reys review and had a listen and he's spot on, Nice one

Ridd

Hey Hey,
Soon this board will be loaded with messages!!
I'm listening "Father Where Were You" (the only song of yours I haven't listened to yet) very painful and retrospective but the song comes full circle which is awsome, so many of my songs have no "resolution".

This song has reached deep into my soul and through your words, have given me a better understanding of how my two older children might feel about their mom...Sorry for spilling my guts out on your board but your song really affected me...
Peace and Love,
Rey

Your music shows you have really great song writing skills. Rey very rarely spotlights anybody so I figured I had better listen! :)

Your lyrics are very cool! 'Father Where Were You' is a master work of timing and delivery!
I think you are underestimating you guitar skills. You're very good!
Keep producing great songs!
Best regards, ...Tom

I checked your stuff out too. You're a strong writer. I like the honesty and soul in your songs, it's hard to pull off sometimes with just an acoustic and vocals but you do it nicely. I can certainly relate to some of your themes.

Keep up the great work.
Jeff

I heard your stuff and I must say I'm impressed.
Yes,there IS definitely too much of reverb on those tracks.

Paaah,and you say I write good lyrics? ady,you're a bloody maestro !

I think it's the reverb that's making your voice sound distant,and thus,making it hard for me to make out what you're singing. But on the whole,I think these are really good tracks,they are.My personal fav. was The Sun Will Shine.Very metaphoric,and like you said,self-explatory. Beautiful in its own way.

Hey Sharma,

First, you have a fairly nice voice and your delivery is pleasing plaintive. The tools are there.

The most pressing thing that needs alteration in the track is the vocal level. There are two steps: first, a slight bit (a very slight bit) of vocal comression to regularize the vocal volume; secondly, the vocal - relative to the guitar - needs to be louder. (The guitar could be quieted a bit, or the vocal raised.)

(Incidentally, if you don't have a compressor with your software you can get several free ones. The program Sound Engine - a freeware wave editor - includes many excellent little features and is absolutely free.)

You say you need the reverb, but if raising the level doesn't make the word clearer, then it would be better to step the reverb back a bit. Reverb muddies vocals. It works well with a refrain that is repeated - where the words are going to be picked up no matter what. When a recording is this simple - one instrument and a voice - you need the voice to carry more of the load.

A better solution is to double track the voice and (perhaps) employ some harmony.

Finally, although it is right to begin the song simply, it might be an idea to bring in some additional elements (a warm pad or soft strings, towards the end of the song). It might be worth the exeriment.

sharma kay - the sun will rise

funny. the guitar reminds me of an intro to a death metal song.. nevermind. pretty good song. ok performance. you didn´t start wailing and all that usual crap. about the reverb. being kind of new to recording myself (something i´ll probably always be as i refuse to take others advice hrm) i know it´s easy to think the song sounds better when there´s a lot of reverb.. sometimes it does. but i don´t know about this one. i would have liked to hear just one take. guitar and vocals. clean dry sound. the reverb makes it all pretty messy and it kills some of the sharpness in your vocals. this is a regular singer/songwriter tune and i don´t know if the ambient touch the reverb gives it really works.

Nice work Sharma! I read your lyrics before listening, and you know....The lyrics have the ability to move you without even having sound!
Very nice music and a great clear voice!
Looking forward to more!
Best regards

Sharma Kay – Don’t Worry ‘Bout Me.

Hey, I’m from Portland too, or at least I lived there for 12 years, so let’s give a shout out to the Rose City! This is much better than I thought it would be, given your self-depreciating post. I like the guitar playing a lot, and the singing and melodies are dead on most of the time. The production, obviously, is bare bones, with singing in one ear and guitar in the other. I don’t actually believe that it needs that much reverb – the reverb isn’t too refined itself. You could say that the lyrics are saccharine, but judging from your site, you make no bones about what you’re trying to express, and I can’t complain, given that my own lyrics are unrelenting bile, and it would be absurd of me to say that everyone has to be negative all the time.

I think it’s time to invest in a 4-Track.

2.5 Stars (out of 4)

SHARMA ROCKS!

Ah yeah i'm listening to your stuff too. It's pretty good. I'm not really into acoustic folk but I say it's good. The vocals sound good and i actually understand them (i think). good job

I agree Rey. I ahve listened to her stuff this morning and came to a similar conclusion. I haven't posted her review yet, because its wayy down the list, but I have to say there is a lot to be said about this girl's abillities as a songwriter.
L

I thought I would take a moment to review someone who has been giving so much time lately at SoundClick, her name is Sharma Kay and her genre is Acoust Vocals. The song I chose to review is: Don't Worry "Bout Me, My Friend

Guitar and vocals, I'm sure anyone who knows me is aware that I'm partial to this type of song, the relationship between the singer/songwriter and the instrument (that little box with the strings on it) is a special one. I once met a young man at the local Guitar Center who was playing an Ovation and one of the things he said was- "I like Ovations because the back is curved and it contours to your body so I can feel the vibrations as I play"

This is a fine example of the fine relationship between man and instrument, in the case of Sharma Kay, woman and instrument. She has this relationship, it's plainly evident if you listen to any of her songs.

On "Don't Worry 'Bout Me" Sharma sings about letting go, letting go of love physically but do we ever let go mentally? I don't think so, I have thought about this many times and I don't believe that we ever stop loving the people that cross our path. Sharma is a story teller a singer songwriter and here she shines, showing her craft with pride, great guitar picking accompanied by a sweet and honest vocal style that IMO overpowers any imperfections or flaws in her performance, which by the way are very miniscule compared to my musings.....

Sharma is struggling with the woes of recording herself as many of us do I am sure but she inventively perseveres and gets her music recorded because there is a will to share. Armed with her trusty PC and a tape recorder and a keyboard she has made some recordings of herself, mind you they are far from perfect but who cares!!! I can tell what she is doing musically and I can see/hear that she is a great songwriter and singer with something to say...

If your cup of tea is simple and honest songwriting, give Sharma a listen and even if it's not, broaden your horizons and tune in, it wont hurt ya... I promise....

Rey

hey. your song 'don't worry about me' is really great. the tune is really great, and your vocals are quite nice. the performance overall is excellent. a nice, quiet country-tinged folk song.
my only complaint regards the production. the guitar sounds a bit canned, and although the resulting reverb is good, a richer sound would be better. but i know means of good production are often not available.

keep the good sounds a'comin'!

hey, just stopping by to tell you that i like your stuff. i do everything myself as well so i know how hard it can be.

my only critique is don't be so apologetic in your "interview". you almost sound like you're sorry that you posted your stuff. don't be! do it because you like it and you're proud of what you do. you have talent so keep at it.

good luck:)!

Well Sharma Kay ! I'd just requested you to review my track in Critic's Corner and then I visited you page.   I've heard the track 1st track "The Sun Will Rise" and I really liked it.
Very nice composition and the guitar sounds good too.. :) Keep up the good work ! ;)

I'm listening to your muisc now. It's very sweet, very melancholy. I like it.

First of all, it has been a long time since I have heard such personal material. I was asked once early on in my own career if I didn't feel a bit naked exposing so much of myself in my music and it took me by surprise. Now I understand what he meant. Anyway . .

The Sun Will rise - Nice piece. Like the acoustic gutar a lot. You also have a nice voice - a bit of professional training would go a long way.

Father Where Were You - quite sad, though you opened a door of hope lyrically and I like that. I hope writing and playing this song helped heal your heart. Again, a nice clean acoustic guitar and good movment. Mix is even better in this one - the vocal a bit more up front.

Don't Worry 'Bout Me - Again, nice guitar work and solid vocal. This one has a bit too much reverb and tends to hide the parts somewhat. I'd do a re-mix and bring things up front.

All in all you have some talent and are obviously young. Keep working on those dreams and write something really FUN.

i checked out your music and i love your guitar work.. good job! -- Chris

Hi Sharma,
I purposely did not comment on your recoedings because I feel that you are struggling with them as I always do! I have come accross some solutions if you need any help, what type of equipment do you use? On the one song I reviewed there was an abundance of reverb and I think you mentioned somewhere that you were having issues with making your recordings sound richer...
As for your vocal....don't worry about perfection, listen to Mindy Smith......the imperfections in her vocals are what give her character...Neil Young has made a pretty good career with his off key style!!!
I think you have a great voice!

Checked out "The Sun will Rise." This is one sad song, but a good one. It is well played and the lyrics a very good. I wish I could understand all of them though. But that is the same problem we ran into with the demo we made. Also The guitar seems a little muddy. It needs to be more crisp. Overall, this is a good acoustic song and I enjoyed listening to it.

Hi Sharma,

I've had a listen to your song The Sun Will Rise.Nice soft mellow moody feel to it.Your voice certainly suits that kind of emotion,and the minor key melancholy.Your guitar sounds good,although a bit hesitant,as though you were concentrating hard on the playing.Maybe it was intentional though,as it does contribute to the emotion.Perhaps the recording quality could be a bit better,but nevertheless - nice work.

best wishes
gordon

The Sun Will Rise: Some beautiful and a good guitar playing (I love fingered melodies, even though I suck at playing them). Your voice is calm and soothing. Good job on this.

Father Where Were You: This ones sounds better, the vocal harmonies are very good. Good vocals and guitar, as well.

Don't Worry 'Bout Me: Certainly the best of them IMO, the melody rules and the guitar is awesome. The lyrics are emotive and beautiful.

Conclusion: You have a great and relaxing voice. Do you play the guitar as well? If you do, you really have a future in music. Your lyrics are simple but they mean a lot.

Would you be interested in a collab? Your voice made me think about a duo or something.

Who is this person who calls herself "Sharma", who is so willing to give her time to review so many songs, even those to which she admittedly knows little about???? Well, lets see... "The Sun Will Rise" By Sharma

Her Music: Lets start with the composition, an acoustic guitar with that classic finger picking style and a somewhat familiar descending chord progression...Very well excecuted, flawless playing!

Then we have Sharma's voice.....well what can I say, it's simple and beautiful and on this song she has total command of her lyrical content....which by the way, if you take a moment to read the lyrics you will see that they are self explanatory...a story of love -lost and found...

This is a somewhat reflective piece, soft and mellow, perfect for the coffee house where this would just shine.....

What kind of music is this? Well some may lump this into the folk category but as far as I'm concerned this just great music.....

Keep it up Sharma

I did listen to your music and I thought It was Great! the guitar is pretty and so is your voice and I look at your page and you have a good sense of humor (playing live). I just wanted to thank you for your review and your music, please just keep on playing.

Your stuff is really nice by the way and your voice is very good, and makes me all the more suprised you listened to the whole of Keen Dick.

I think you do need to multi-track your recordings (seperate vocals from guitar). That way it will be much easier to set the levels.
When recording, it is best to work from the instrument to mix-down in terms of levels. You say you have 5 or so volume changing bits, it's very important to have it in the right order to get the best quality and prevent background noise. Make sure the volume is the highest it can go before clipping (peaking) at the 1st volume levelling, then moving up to the 2nd levelling point. If it is quiet on the 1st and you have to turn the volume up on the amp/computer/whatever, it will not only increase the vocal level but also the background noise.
Reverb shouldn't clip the audio, maybe it's that specific reverb- on the reverb module- reduce the 'gain' there is a bit with that. I suggest getting new recording software. You can get this for free- it isnt exactly legal but it is easy and safe. For a beginner 'Cool Edit Pro' is great.

To record guitar, the same thing goes with the volume- it is best to have the input as loud as possible. It can be hard to stop moving about but it will provide the best quality. Usually, the mic is best positioned at 30cm away from where the neck meets the body on the guitar (if there is too much boom, position it further down the neck).

If you need any more help I am happy to give it,

Jack Frankland

I heard your songs by the way on soundclick and I really like them. I'm not very good at writing reviews, and I doubt other people are so that's probably why they haven't reviewed your stuff. I find your songs calming, the words are a little cliched at times but obviously how you feel so it's OK. The sound quality is good, and the levels sound fine to me, if you need advice on the technological side I wouldnt mind helping you if you like. keep writing, and good luck,
Jack.