...i like it! Thanks for the link.

Luv Caz x

I'm sorry to say it but that is appauling [sic], it sounds like you aren't even trying. Join a band or something and play rhythm, these instrumentals on your own just aren't good. Try something different please!

I like the lyrics. (lol) No, seriously. I like the first bit, and the final bit too, only thing about the final bit is that it goes on too long in my opinion. But that's just me. I'm not saying I can sing (www.plaintheband.tk). Stefan   

It's a nice chord progression. But you have too much of the same thing going on for too long. And even when you're doing an instrumental it's helpful to have melody attached to it. Sorry if I sound harsh, just a suggestion. I am only half way through listening so.... I like the effect you have on the guitar. It's nice. Yeah the chords are really cool, but you really need a melody over the top. Because the end is pretty bland without a melody. It is nice though, I do like it, just trying to be helpful... Lucas