Lyrics:
Thank you . . . for not only stating your case in a hip yet eloquent manner, but for actually saying something that matters! I can especially appreciate your positive fearless outlook and message to the rest of the rhymers stuck in the cycle of writing relentless dribble and jive. Not only are you one of the only ones who've ever posted their flow for our review, you are one of the only ones worth reading! Great work. 10/10

Arrangement &
Production:
There is nothing about this music production, arrangement, or vocal that I could suggest changing. It's hip, fresh, and current, yet innovative, cutting egde, and refreshing. Great mix, master, and flow. Keep on crankin' em' our for our enjoyment. 10/10

Lead Vocal:
Yo money, you can flow with the best of them . . . why aren't you? We'll have to help work on gettin' you out there for the world to hear/see. Your artistry is solid and well developed, and your flow is mature and highly professional for such a young artist. Great phrasing, character, and delivery. 10/10

Musicianship:
With basic musical melodic and harmonic lines, there is nothing highly creative or ground breaking about these instrumental performances. But of course, in this genre, they don't have to be Beethoven either. Everything is perfect for the track. Tasteful, sparse, and funky. 8/10

Originality:
Thankfully, you know how to play the game, but on your own terms, while keepin' it real and delivering a powerful personal message. Keep on striving to create something new for us to hear lyrically, and that continues to spark a musical nerve in us all, we appreciate your labors! 8/10

Marketability:
If you don't land a major recording contract within the next five seconds, I'm quitting the business. But better yet hold on . . . Just market yourself to every possible licensing opportunity available to you, while selling as many units and merchandise on your own as you can. But when "they" the big timers come callin', and they will, hang on to all of your publishing rights 10/10

General Comments:
If you have yet to, assemble the ultimate team of attorneys, managers, and publicity pro's . . . do so a.s.a.p. You're on your way to the top. And we here at Makeastar.com will do everything within our power to see that our efforts to help are not in vein. Soon my friend . . .

Average Score: 9.143