bad ass f*** ing track man.
marka - as usual goes hard on every track.
good hustle on this one .
come peep my tracks if you got a chance .
let me know what you think.
thank.

Marka, spoke with him very briefly a few times through email. Dude is a well collected person just from the sense of things, and definately puts together some iLL ass hooks.

I usually dont spread comments around, I normally dont have time. But i'll do a general break-down since I saw this on the first few pages and Marka has been a frequent artist i've heard on here among others.

1st dudes delivery was fair and lyrics/punch lines were also on ok, nothing to amazing. Quality wise though was a little off and all similar to the second artists verse as well.

It does sound that all together everything was recorded seperately from different studios and possibley all were mixed down and edited/mastered differently and not properly merged with the track. You may want to look into someone who knows how to engineer vocals and track mixing, especially on the mastering end. Just a suggestion. Need tips feel free to ask.

Marka, of course. I dont have much complaint. I often think dude goes faster than he can handle but I'd say he's right up there with Twista and Bone-Thugs as far as speed, something I've always had trouble doing. Much respect lyrically and quality wise as well.

2nd dude. Not feeling him. Presence, delivery and lyrics weren't anything special. I got the message but I wasn't convinced. Not saying he dont have potential, its there sure. Need to sound more convincing and confident in your delivery and your art. More conviction and enthusiasm or emotion if you will. Gotta feel it yourself in order to draw others in. But definately, potential. Constructive criticism here.


All in all, beat (i assume producers of royal audio tunes made) is absolute fire. I have no complain on the beat production what so ever, had I heard it first I would of bought it out-right. Quality of it excellent.

As far as the track itself, its ok. nothing special. To be honest the HOOK is what helped it along... although most songs need a catchy hook but shouldn't entirely make up the song...

This beat deserved more than what it was put to... Hook was perfectly fine, I think more experienced artists should have taken part in this. I would of loved to had put effort into here.

Goodwork none-the-less. Stay humble.


--Tru

this track is bangin, lyrics are nice, the production is impressive, clean track
keep grindin

dis sh** here live as f*** bru-n its anotha one on here dats i'm feelin hard as hell-keep doin ya thang