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Hey sister.. stop by my page if u get a chance.. i just uploaded more than 100 new FREE BEATS..
dont wait come and download what ever u like
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITTING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL SONG"PURPOSE" I DOWNLOADED IT AND PUT IN ON MY I-POD SO AS I GO THROUGH MY DAY AND THE DEVIL TRIES TO FUTRATE A BROTHER I PLAY YOUR SONG!! STAY BLESSED SITTA GIRL YOUR BROTHER IN CHRIST "DEACONSON"
Maritta on SoundClick, You got the dopest page, check out the beats on mine! 1.
Hey Maritta,

Thanks for the encouraging words. I pray the same for you. You have a magnificent voice so I know God is using you as a vessel. Purpose is a great song, the guitar pulls me in immediately, and the lyrics are great. Keep up the good work and tell me if I can help you with anything.

Peace and love in Christ,
ZK
Very nice! Your music is definitely a blessing. Keep up the good work.

God Bless,

FC
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smile :) This discribes my whole life on earth! smile :)

Jesus Peace
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Maritta, May all of God's good blessings continue to follow you, forever. Thank you for your friendship.
It has been a pretty long day, very blessed day; and hearing your song here has even increased the blessing. The Lord is good and He is blessed by our ministries. I'm glad that you are back to shine for His glory in this great gift of yours...and He has made you to shine! I really believe you are going to do greater than you image.

Thank you again for blessing me today! smile :)

All Love Always
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Now THIS is nice. I'm a skater and the first thing I thought was "backward skate". The hook is near PERFECT. My only nitpick is I'd love to hear you really attack the verses ya kno? Get in there and give it the "home alone in the shower" treatment. Just let loose on it and make it happen the way you want it to.

VERY nice song here. Listened twice.
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Hey.

First let me say this, overall this is really good. Its well written, presents a message and concept worth listening to and I can tell youre a talented vocalist.

The production handcuffs this a bit. The vocal tracks are over layered for most of the song which gives it a monotone, saturated feel. it sounds too much like one track is overcompensating to stay in tune with the other. This tends to give the illusion of two people singing together for the first time and they arent sure when the other is gonna go high or low.

As for your actual performance of the song, I get the feeling you have a wider range than you show here. Theres no build up, no climax and no true breakdown. It kinda starts, goes and ends not having taken the listener anywhere.

Again, I think this is good. As good as it may be, however, it can be so much better. Youre talented and I know you can pull it off. Stay at it madam.
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FEELIN WHAT U DO KEEP IT UP AND STAY HAPPY............ ONE
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