Beautiful, absolutely beautiful, Ian!
What a joy to listen to this piece! I love this
With thanks and blessings in Christ, Lea

positive and upbeat. more instruments?

I believe these lyrics are true.

I wished they would play this in grocery stores and elevators.

LOVE

IannaI, its been way to long since a visited here, but its great to hear what what I'm hearing. This has a serious smooth pop feel. Thank God for Jesus.

LOVE

Very well done. You are starting to hit the bullseye matching lyrics with melody.

HI Ian,
The words and Music have a Nice Feel to IT!
Great Job, my friend,

Blessings,
Heleana Maria

Ian, I LOVE THIS!!!!

Many Blessings

Von

I love the lyrics to this song! It's a great dance song.

Wow, Ian, again a wonderful song!! Great to listen to you
Lea

Ey mate,
How you doing?
Haven't chatted in a long time. I've been off this forum for some time, had issues with the production pc plus works been raining down.

ANyhow just checked out scattered pieces. i like the electronic aspect of the track, good vocals on the vocals, nicely leveled, nice chorus at parts.. and suitable beat for the tune overall..
very well done indeed dude. i can't be critical of anything as it all seems to flow well..
glad to have checked it out.

cheers mate.
Adz

Iannai,
very good stuff. Your vocals sound super and remind me of a lot of 80's stuff I used to listen to. The sound is great and crisp with a nice wash in the chorus. All the elements are crystal clear and well balanced. Overall this is great. I just didn't dig the lyrics. please don't hold that against me. Just not my taste. But otherwise a fantastic track!

Now then,
Been looking around here. Been a long time since I have been on SC.

I noticed your music in the charts so I clicked to listen.
Currently listening to your track
"Scattered Pieces"

Man those beats are awsome bruv, perfect grinding bassline nice strings and piano combination. Then your vocals, Man the full package here.
The vocals are in perfect tone with the music and sang very carefully. I cannot help but notice the difference in quality between the music and vocals.
This is one issue that I have been struggling with myself.
There is one thing that i noticed about the vocals you may not have tried. try putting the vocals under a filter to bring out the subtlies in your voice. Also always use a faser on vocals to tune harmonics and use compression.

Don't get me wrong geezah, your sound and vibe is awsome. Once you get the vocals under control you stand a fighting chance.

Respect
Mind productions

You really came out with interesting changes here. Like it very much. Good transitions.
Would you listen to Here we go and tell me what you feel.
Love and music,
Zilia

Hi again Ian!
Another great song, especially I like the composition and the arrangement which are perfect to the lyrics. And your performance is awesome. It´s so good to hear you sing again. I like this song very much
With thanks and blessings, Lea