ok dude now i check you i'm listening to your cave electronica :
-bass need a lowpass at the begginind or a filter or maybe u can change sound, intro is too long, voices r good and trippy but u may classified this "ambient" cause it has not a real interest in electronica genre in my mind, i mean i would never use to listen this when i need mellow but chill instead this is how i when i would like to spent time that i would like to listen this track (and it don't worse more than 0,25$ or is it longer in the sell version ? i will see this)
cheers
continue to work hard !