yo you got some straight sh** . but you should work on ridin the beat smoother cuz sometimes it sounds like your
all over the place. not sayin to slow down your pace or nuttin just finesse it a little more. maybe find a different way to word things and eliminate some extra words feel me?
just some advice not a diss. you got potential.
oh but i gotta ask what the f*** is up with spittin that cage song exactly the way it was. i thought when i heard the beat you were gonna rock that sh** with your own style and lyrics but you spit his exact sh** . why? if you got the instrumental then do your own thing feel me?

wus gud playa if u lukin for beats holla at me

what up homie ????....it's been a while now.

you said you wanted to collab. sometime. i told you i'd check you out first.

i just checked a few joints from your page , you got that Eminem sound.

you aight though man , you could use a better mic. & mix though.

otherwise....yea , you got a descent flow homie.

but yea....we can do a track whenever man. just let me mix it down though and we're good.

hit me back , sorry about such a delayed response. i been grindin' hard lately.

Hi, I`m a Rapper & make a mixtape. I like your Style, your Beatz are very TIGHT! Please contact me at (mcadriano@okay.ms)
I pay also for Beatz, Peace!

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Wats up man, were just a couple of 15 year old kids trying to make it musicaly, were sorta new at this so were just trying to find the right direction, if u could stop by an have a listen and tell us if were going in the right direction or not, oh an im sorry about the spam but if u leave some feedback i promise ill drop some votes, feedback, and a station add your way....thanks man
jD~

hey whats up man? Your stuff is sick, especially that battle verse against Petro i was really feelin it. Hit me up if you down for a collab some time

what's good,I sent you the track.didn't get any feed back hit me up,1

wheres the beat for the mental patient rap?

The plans are set in concrete, the Northsiderz takeover is now in effect...
Its the missing piece to the puzzle, its the fourth wave.
3 new tracks Hope you can support the movement

wot up! likin your sh*** man, chek me out and tell me wot u fink...............still broke

Yo, this is Elemental from burnt bush productions. I'm from Crown Heights, Brooklyn but I'm doin my thing out of VA right now, it appears we both have the same name (we both got good taste). E-mail me at elemental@livingmind.com and let me know where u from, I gotta track hittin the radio next week and am goin on tour soon, I see u feelin the left wing political sh***, let's get up yo.

Elemental

whats good playa.....liked what i'm hearing keep banging em out.......stay up fammo......peace!

back to see whats new with you...stay up..peace